About: “Old” Puzzle of a Lost Girl 01

Since Im completely remaking the Puzzle story, I didnt like the old one that much, and needs to be put together anyway, however, its done, so, about it…
After the Old Demons story, you had Reo and Little Wolf playing a lets say mystery novel game, and from then it goes on with elements of the main story mixed along and misplaced, also how the emotions of the core disrupt whatever is going on with the shell.
Its not a bad idea, but meh, so, here goes the old story.
Im working on the new Puzzle story, that is more focused about Reo and, lets say moments of him, and features the Detective, you already know her from later, right? of course you do.

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I still dont know if I should shape both glasses equally.
Its gonna be difficult to read, and very, just, out there, crude.
And the new stories go on, Im basically writing this to let the hormones go down a little from… well, Happiness of Pigeon is the title, 1 is Two Eggs, which is almost done and posted here, talks about the new, emh, duality, of Aurora of present and past.
2 is Tryout Nest, the new Alice story, romance and tragedy.
3 is Mr Duck Days, Original Little Wolf finally talks… not that much though.
4 is Flying in Circles, stories about paranoia and such.
5 is Feather Dreams, very hormonal, romantic, rubrub, ohhh… but one is one and one is two, so… its kind of weird to realize where some of those come from. And Im having trouble dealing with those emotions, too chemical and powerful, and meaningful, and Im taking too much time getting things prepared, which is cool cause I have been fixing lots of personal stuff and everything is in a good shape, but, I, guess, being a little crude myself should be ok for the flow.
And, chapter one of the “Old” Puzzle of a Lost Girl:

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The Puzzle of a Lost Girl ch 01

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Hurry!… I think she wants, a cake, a cake with her coffee… she said that the choice you made about the next one to be murdered made no sense because she was already dead, pay attention! why are you so stupid?!… auuuuch, dont hurt the great Reo… just pick up the nurse and continue, it has to be someone close to them… mmm, I dont want to miss this one, I really like her, “oh Karen, youre so pretty, Im sorry that I accused you to your beloved brother of being at the murder scene”… the girl was his arranged fiance, it made perfect sense… it was also a way to tell that I knew of her twisted love for him… and the idiot doesnt even realize… I got everything right so far, why does it has to be so difficult now that shes in front of you?… lets move on, its been months and we havent finish because you get so busy lately… I lost what the mystery is about, I dont even remember what the blood types meant… it meant that they could be relatives or not depending on the type… I feel really bad for Karen, I dont think shell ever be happy with her brother, I have the bad feeling that she will be murdered near the end… anata no paranoia wa, anata no paranoia wa! gwahahaha.

Long ago in a faraway land there was a very young beautiful girl named Hikari, she lived with her kind mother and they both used to remember about the lovely man who died some years ago, he was her father, the caring husband of her mother.
Many years ago Hikaris mother, named also Hikari, lived with her parents and her brother, they were rich and enjoyed a luxurious life, the parents were very devoted people and the mother spend many daily hours teaching her daughter about the glory of the heavens and the pain of the hells, the power of the god, the end of the world and beauty of creation.
Eventually they had an accident near another city while doing a business trip, both of them died and life for Hikari completely changed as her older brother took charge of everything.
Hikari cried for hours because of her death parents, it was something she never expected, it caught her by surprise and now she was left alone, one would think that she had her brother, but. After hearing the news, her brother organized the funerals and was the one who talked to people, he ordered Hikari to dress nicely and just said thanks to whoever tried to comfort her, while her brother was social skilled and already a big personality in the city, she was quiet and lonely, she didnt have any friends and could barely speak in public, at the funeral she became a beautiful black dressed doll seated at a corner who could only repeat a couple of words, on the contrary, her brother was already making business plans with older men who were friends of their dead father.
The funerals passed and it was time to realize what homelife was going to become, there was only Hikari and her brother, and it was extremely painful for her because he still was full of desire from when they were younger.

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Hikari used to play with her little older brother, they were both kids and had a lot of fun running in the big green and flowered gardens, they even looked for secret places to rest and sleep together, but after the little boy senses began to awake, her brother started to develop a forbidden attraction for her sister, she was everything to him, she was all he ever knew, he saw his mother as an old disgusting lady, and his sister as his mother, lover, friend, idol, everything a beautiful girl he was inloved with could be, she was his whole world and meaning.
On the contrary, his sister had a very structured idea about what her family was, what her mother taught her was all there was, she didnt feel much about everything else, and that included the forbidden feelings of her brother. During playtime, he started to get closer to her body, gave her strong hugs and told her that he loved her, she used to laugh and hug him back, saying that she loved him too; then the first time happened, they were at their favorite secret place, he got on top of her and started to kiss her lips, they used to kiss like that all the time but now it was obviously different, she could sense his passion and desire, it twisted and hurt her heart, she thought that it was wrong and sinful, that he was her brother and he could never be her husband, that god and their mother was going to be angry, that it was the work of a demon, that she lost her beloved brother to lust.
She tried to stop him, she thought of lecturing him about the teachings of the church, to reason with him about the sins inside his heart and what it could do to the family, but she couldnt even do that, her older brother was too strong for a young weak girl as Hikari, she tried to fight but he forced his ways, first it was kissing, then he roughly touched all of her body to later rip her clothes off, exposing her naked body to her brother was too much and she screamed, he forcefully covered her mouth and advised her to keep quiet or else he would tell their parents that she was the one seducing him.
The parents always loved their older son very much and made true all of his desires, if he wanted something he always got it, on the contrary, Hikari was like a faulty spare son that was born as a woman, childish and with no skills at all, she was useless and her father hated her, her mother as well but she had some compassion, she thought that she could become a good nun one day, or something that they could be proud about, without an attention to Hikaris feelings, who always knew her older brother was the priority for everything.
So, at that world and heart breaking moment, Hikari nodded her head and cried, she accepted to give her body away for her brother to enjoy, and he did, he was violent and uncaring, all he wanted was pleasure, Hikari could only stand the neverending pain in silence, she couldnt even beg her brother for forgiveness, she thought that it was somehow her fault.
Many more times happened until one day Hikari couldnt take it anymore and continuously screamed like crazy, her brother freaked out and stopped his acts, their mother heard and went inside her room to find in horror about the sins of her children, she froze in panic but quickly reacted, she got close and pushed them apart, she turned to Hikari and with all her strength slapped her face, then to her son, angrily stared and told him to get out as she grabbed his arms and walked him out, then closed the door. A short time after, she went back in and locked the room door from the outside, at distance Hikari could listen the many lectures she gave to her beloved son, later it seemed that he said to her that he was sorry and that he was not going to do that again, her voice tone changed and everything was more peaceful, until the time she came back to unlock Hikaris room door.

 

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